Kia Ora bloggers
On Friday we got to do free writing i did a horror story i had so much fun writing it
here's my story i hope you like it and maybe get scared and here's why we did it. We did it to add figurative language into are writing?
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Kia Ora bloggers
On Friday we got to do free writing i did a horror story i had so much fun writing it
here's my story i hope you like it and maybe get scared and here's why we did it. We did it to add figurative language into are writing?
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HI Dylan nice story i loved the end part when the clown suits with chiken nugets in the maby next time you could put your title on top other than that it was realy good
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