Kia ora bloggers today i'm showing you my weather animation me and my friends made this during Te reo Maori and we have been working on saying Maori weather in the morning.
Kia ora, I am a student at Marshland School, Welcome - Haere Mai. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note my work may include spelling or other errors because some of it will be my first drafts. I would like to get your feedback - comments, thoughts, questions and ideas to help me Learn Create Share.
Friday, April 9, 2021
Maori weather animation
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Hi Dylan that was a good slide show it was relay cool and i relay licked it
ReplyDeletethanks Luke maybe next time recheck your comment from Dylan
DeleteHi Dylan that was very good.
ReplyDeleteKia ora Dylan
ReplyDeleteGood job that is a cool slide if you did make it with Sam,Archer,Luke and Ollie maybe you could put your name to but overall its really good.
hope you have a good holiday.
Hey Dylan,
ReplyDeleteI really like your animation, thought maybe you could make more slides when they are talking so that when I read it, I can just hold down the right arrow and I would be able to read it a lot clearer.
I think you could work on your puncuation and grammar.
I really love the way that you have laid out your animation and it makes a lot of sense.
Is cold in Maori makariri?
See you next term,
Izzy :)
hi izzy thank you very much for commenting on my blog and i will make them talk in more slides from Dylan
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